Saturday, July 14, 2012

55 Fiction : Committed


Sitting on the couch, sipping a drink, He was waiting for her.
Tuning in to “Tonight’s gonna be a good night” he smiled with hope.
Heart skipped a beat, she had entered.
He made his way through the crowd to her.
I love you, he said.
Committed, she replied.

4 comments:

  1. Really good one. Although, I wish things were so easy!!

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  2. I must admit I read back a few hours back in a positive tone, but now I get the negative meaning.
    Surprised, looking at how the mood determines the meaning.

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  3. @whatzthereinname

    It was written with a negative tone and the possible positive tone it could have dint strike me till you commented. So, thanks :)

    Agree on the mood part :)

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