Sitting on the couch, sipping
a drink, He was waiting for her.
Tuning in to “Tonight’s gonna
be a good night” he smiled with hope.
Heart skipped a beat, she had
entered.
He made his way through the
crowd to her.
I love you,
he said.
Committed,
she replied.
Really good one. Although, I wish things were so easy!!
ReplyDeleteI must admit I read back a few hours back in a positive tone, but now I get the negative meaning.
ReplyDeleteSurprised, looking at how the mood determines the meaning.
@whatzthereinname
ReplyDeleteIt was written with a negative tone and the possible positive tone it could have dint strike me till you commented. So, thanks :)
Agree on the mood part :)
each time i used to read smaller content that also clear their
ReplyDeletemotive, and that is also happening with this paragraph which I am reading now.
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